Well, It's not bad. It's just kind of confusing. Like, too messy or something. It looks like the effects are crowding the tag. Overall it's pretty cool though.
Yea what hoplite is telling , its to : i think busy is the word for it , or to crowded u know , ? 2 Many effects or details aint good
its not bad what it needs is darkening on the edges, make a new layer and get a soft brush bout 145 size and color black with opac set to 45% and brush around edges and on lighted spots and set to soft light see what you get.