Very nice. Love everything about it. The text work could use a little more attention, but other than that, it's a very nice piece of work. PM me if you ever want to collab on something. I'm pretty good with text if I want to be.
Amazing =] My suggestion for the "beyond the power of humans..." text would be to maybe make it slightly bigger. Experiment with colors, different sizes for words, italicize and bold words to add more emphasis, experiment with different things and you may come up with something really good.
Thats really nice were do u get that render can u give me the link to it cause thats a really good render i think so....