Spent Abit Of Time On This One

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  1. Sep 9, 2007 at 8:03 AM #1
    .brokengenius

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    ver.2
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  2. Sep 9, 2007 at 8:08 AM #2
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    It's pretty nice, man. ONly thing is, the compo is off. Try cropping the left side off at the point where the bottom effects end. It'll be perfect then. I love the depth. Good work, the best i've seen from you yet.
     
  3. Sep 9, 2007 at 8:11 AM #3
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    Nice depth and colours but the composition needs a bit of work IMO.
    The effects are nice too but that random bar disturbs the tag IMO...

    Nice work though.
     
  4. Sep 9, 2007 at 8:22 AM #4
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    it wont disturb it if he crops off the left side.
     
  5. Sep 9, 2007 at 8:54 AM #5
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    The rectangular clipping mask was unnecessary IMO. But nice work on the whole though. Do make the subject (the woman) more prominent too, since that should be the main focus of the sig.
     
  6. Sep 9, 2007 at 6:20 PM #6
    .brokengenius

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    added ver.2 thanks for the comments
     
  7. Sep 9, 2007 at 6:47 PM #7
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    Both of them are really nice i like the bigger one idk i think cause i like sigs that are wide... :)
     
  8. Sep 9, 2007 at 7:25 PM #8
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    v2 FTW. good job.
     
  9. Sep 9, 2007 at 7:41 PM #9
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    Don't liek the fact that you blurred the whole background, it makes it look messy. And dup doesn't help anything, it's just there.
     
  10. Sep 9, 2007 at 8:10 PM #10
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    remove the clipping mask and add some more effects or atleast make em not so blurry.
    Oh ya v1.
     

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