I agree with you, the text doesn't suit it very well, it don't seem very well placed either also its not really blended into the signature it kinda sticks out just a little to much and that white dot on his arm doesn't really seem needed at all try some lighting changes and add some blending, and maybe something to the BG to help add depth it seems to plain and flat =\: i also think i would like the text if it looked tighter together if you get what im trying to say hope the crit helped :wub: