Devil May Cry 3

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  1. BeefStake

    BeefStake Senior Member

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    This is my second ever render with the pen tool, this time i chose a more complex image and I'm very impressed by the result, I even think it could be a premium render if it was larger...

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    Really appreciate some feedback on this one, constructive criticsim not just that sux....lol

    //EDIT:: Made some minor fixes that ppls here pointed out (might have to refresh or clear cache to see changes)
     
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    Theres still some black edging on the hair, but overall its nice. (Even if it has been done over 9000 times before ;] )
     
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    Yeah I see some white under the arm, and some black on the hair, but it's great for a pen tool beginner.
     
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    thx for the replies guys ill fix it up right away
     
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    Nice cut, thanking you.
     
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    definitely been done before, but this is a great cut. great :]
     
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    I like this cut. I would use it for a sig or a wallpaper myself. :D thanks!
     
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    Just some lines and imo you missed a spot between the sword and his arm (the black spot there).
    Overall good job.
     
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    Yup, that's good work. :)
     
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    Awesome, i'm saving for future use
     
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    and good
    10\10
    dante owns
     
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    Nice render although its been done a lot I really like it and you did a good job with it.
     
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    aside being done before, hair could be better. keep practicin on that on. his right shoulder's choppy but very minor. outline under left armpit. keep rendering and good luck
     
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    Thnx arcane_paladin your critique is always welcome :D
     
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    Lovely render bud. ;)
     
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