You're nice for giving that guy a 4 I woulda given that a 2 or 3 5 - lighting is off 8 - nice sig, good flow/lighting
6.5 3-Really not my thing. Weird idea. Don't like the render. Too big of a canvas. Depth is nice, but I just don't like it.
4/10 I don't really see the flow, the lightsource isn't big enough according to all the light on the render's face. Maybe use the burn tool on his face to darken is a bit or use a bigger pixel white softbrush to make your lightsource. Im not really sure about the border and the render on the right side of the tag. It looks a little flat as well. Sorry :/