First Render

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My first Render
I know its a crappy cut but can I get some constructive criticism

 

Not bad. Not bad at all.

There's a dot sticking out under the fingertip (left hand).

Right shoulder seems edgy.

 

really good for your first. just too small, and cut needs practice

 

Nice try.

Good luck!

 

StaiNed212 Where i can get your fonts i like them on www.dafont.com can't find there cool fonts


Sorry From English i;m not england

 

One of the best first timer renders that I've seen, I'm surprised you took on such a difficult image to render too, gotta give you props man. Good job.

 

this is really choppy, but good for a first cut though

 

This is a nice try although choppy but still a nice try.

 

Good for a first. Keep it up.

 

Nice but the knee there choppy

 

Great cut for a first time.