Shadowrun Troll

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I rendered this in GIMP, and it turned out much better than my PS one. This is just my second render, so tell me what I can improve please.

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As always, all advice is welcome

 

nicely cut.
well done

 

Kind of nice cut. I might use it

 

There are a few places where you could have cut closer to the figure, such as a few spots on the left arm... right by the elbow and shoulder. But other than that, it is a pretty neat render. It's a great job for only your second one.

 

ye nice cut , we maybe could use it.

shadowrun is nice game i heard !

 

Thanks for the comments.

Shadowrun is a great game renzo.

 

Nice cut. Thanks for the share.

 

cut closer. the gun tip is red - there is some bg left. choose biger images too. gj in overall as it's your second ;]

 

well done and good job on the mini troll

 

i cant see anything =[

 

Dunno why ace. It shows fine to me.

 

nice render, only a few spots show different colors and such (like mentioned before, the gun is a bit red in the top left corner). but nice job anyway

PS: cool avater you have there, rotating XBOX

 

Hmm.. Nice cut.. ;P
Good Job ;]

 

nice cut

 

not bd for your second, i think a lil more of da top of its head would work also but thats just me. ^_^