7/10 5/10 Sorry, but the first one seems a little too simple. Don't really like the placement of the light source, and the background could do with a little more accenting. The second one has too much brushing, and that red stuff is just confusing. I think it would be much better without it.
6/10 too plain 8/10 can't see a thing but it has a nice flow! 7/10 don't like the text and the effects on sides ;]
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