Fantasy

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  1. kirbir

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    looks great. the only thing that i would change is the color of the grass.
    right now it kind of sticks out. maybe make it a ligter shade of green
     
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    Ohh very nice job
     
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    Yeah i agree about the grass, thanks alot guys :D
     
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    The tones of the fairy don't match the rest of the picture, change them

    The grass needs another shade of green on 1 side of each blade to make it look better

    The wolfs angle is wrong compared to the pictures angle

    The wolfs colours that jumping should match those of the 1 in the picture already if its supposed to be jumping "into" it

    There is a weird colour by the jumping wolfs tail on the white

    The background above the grass looks flat, and out of place, maybe lower the grass down and add some trees or something like in the picture
     
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    Awsome hun, just try somthing with her legs,arse and the grass surrounding it, just dosnt site well, prehaps two shades of green on the grass, and blend her legs in a bit with more grass to cover her
     
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    Ok guys thanks, will sort that out on monday if i can be bothered lol
     
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    bump :)
     
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    K, commented on DA. Nice piece.
     
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    Thanks sweetie :)
     
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    I think the fairy could be blended in better, and the composition would work better if towards the top left corner it got darker, and you saw less detail.

    I like the idea, and the rest of it though.
     
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    Thats really awesome kirbir!

    Are the wolves and fairy from renders?

    Grass just needs a tad of variation in colour imo. Otherwise, brilliant!

    9.5/10
     
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    From some images i found on google, i cut them out :)

    Thank you guys :D
     

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