The Cipher: Think You Can Rhyme?

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  1. Lennox

    Lennox Well-Known Member

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    I've had this going on NSL for a while, so might as well start it here.

    Rules
    1. No stealing lyrics
    2. Minimum is 4 bars
    3. Don't worry if you suck. Practice makes perfect.
    4. Refrain from the N-bomb. Even if you say it when you spit in real life, dont use it here, mods get mad.
    5. Keep it civil. If you get ripped by someone else, just respond by rapping instead of flaming.
    6. Making fun of others is fine, this is battling after all :)

    In this rap equation, you far from a factor
    Take 2 of you, and ya still far from a rapper
    Cuz you think too slow, like a cheetah, ima whole lot faster
    So open ya ears, as i reveal the message like a pastor
    Lennox is the supreme, the divine, your master
    Leave ya blood on the wall like its plaster
    Ya couldnt even graduate the school of hard knocks
    I went out top of my class, PHD, MBA, and a masters
    I got a PHD in the rhyme game, im protege Dr. Seuss
    Other rappers cant compete, might as well buy a noose
    Cant afford? Well im stackin more paper, so why not call me spruce
    So i sit here with my pen n pad, lyrically prescribin remedies
    Makin enemies, ya not emo, but ill give ya suicidal tendancies
    My ****s too complex for ya, usin commas, periods, and parenthases
    I know the art of flow, like the back of my hand
    Know how to enouciate, to time and how to use emphasis
    I chew you up and spit ya out, like melon seeds
     
  2. diverseartist

    diverseartist Well-Known Member

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    the life in this hood
    aint no good
    blockeds be erware
    causin distress somewhere
    so my blockeds
    its time to break it down
    this, its coming from your main man in town
    the life i live, im always involved in crime
    or im this cell block, doin time
    but im always thinkin of my ryhme
    tryin to make a livin for my kids and me,
    tryin ta find a way other than sellin rocks wit extacy
    the life in this hood
    aint no good
    blockeds be erware
    causin distress somehwere
    we either sniffin, or we running..tryin to escape
    sometimes i believe this life is a mistake
    ermornin i get up and look at ma dieing kids
    get close, neva knowin, dis may be da last kiss
    they off to school
    and im sittin here, tryin ta make a livin by being cool
    sumthins wrong dis cant be the way to live
    stealin from ma nieghbor..tryin to follo god...but its impossible to give
    the life in this hood
    aint no good
    blockeds be erware
    causin distress somehwere
    now, you gotta watch you back in every corna
    er night...i hear shots from a revolva
    oh god wheres the peace to be found
    i gotta keep turnin my head, watchin my back 24/7 twistin round'n'round
    so maybe the time has come to give in
    **** the world, drink sum 20 bottles of gin
    next thing you know, your in a dream
    are you dead or alive? you hear gun shots erwer, you hear your neighbor scream
    but thats ma life, walkin, or sleepin
    i cant tell the difference, now the neighborhoods screamin
    the life in this hood
    aint no good
    blockeds be erware
    causin distress somehwere
     
  3. Lennox

    Lennox Well-Known Member

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    keep em comin
     
  4. Lennox

    Lennox Well-Known Member

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    .
     
  5. Nightmarelord

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    That aint rhyme, that is rap. <_<
     
  6. r0flm40

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    Gl with this topic. I better not try as i'd fail miserably ;D
     
  7. CaptainPeanuts

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    yeah, it was a copy and paste of his original post... Yet again he tries to use the n-word, but it blocks it... will you never learn? Here's one for you.

    I've had enough of this rap crap, it's making me sick,
    You spew racial biases, and call it a hit.
    You can call me a "hater", I'll understand,
    You'll still sound like an illegitimate fan.
    See, this is the problem with society today,
    People can't use sentences, but still get paid.
    Do yourself a favor and go back to school,
    Take a hard look at some of the grammatical rules.
    Maybe then you'll realize how dumb this sounds,
    Start going to school and make a difference in your town.
     
  8. GR.Konvict

    GR.Konvict Well-Known Member

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    LOL< Oh dear lol. I actually have respect for some rappers (mainly eminem). But that was funny! lol You win.
     
  9. CaptainPeanuts

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    I'm going to get e-ganged up on now.... lol
     
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    Wow, thats great. Did you make that or get it from somewhere?
    I agree with CaptainPeanuts. I think i love this guy now :lol:
    If i could +rep i would ;)
     
  11. CaptainPeanuts

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    Nope, made it up. I was in a pissy mood, so I figured why not. English ftw eh?
     
  12. Lennox

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    Ya may think you sick, but boys know im the sickest
    You too ignorant, boy ya skull must be tha thickest
    So sit down, scribble n take notes, as i spit this
    And when its all said n done, you gonna miss this
    Got nothin gainst ya, but this is strictly business
    My net worth skyrockets, while yours diminsh, ya finshed
    Seems like you got down proper punctuation
    But lyrically ya got nothin, on the squad you be facin
    My minds racin, you just copy n pastin
     
  13. CaptainPeanuts

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    Wow, your e-rhymes are great, you must really be proud.
    But still, to me, you're nothing but a 12 year old clown.
    You just proved my point, whether you wanted to or not.
    You take that out in the real world, you don't have a shot.
    So, sit back and relax, keep corrupting your mind,
    While you're working at McDonalds, I'll be getting mine...

    I'm done after this... this is retarted...
     
  14. Lennox

    Lennox Well-Known Member

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    hahaha

    Ima make you bleed like its that time of the month
    Cuz you comin up shorter than danny devito dunk
    Im an iceberg, so like the titanic you sunk
    To the bottom of the deep blue sea
    So ya better remember me, as i go down in history
    60 years from now, hear me on those Mp3's
    ya weak rhymes corrupt my brain like extacy
    But i still got some time, so ill give ya a math lesson
    Ill dumb it down now, no need to be stressin
    2 of you, makes 1 of me, so i must be 24 logically
    o sorry time to run, thats ya moms callin me
     
  15. SomeThingCreepy

    SomeThingCreepy Well-Known Member

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    HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
    HEHEHEHEHEHEHEH
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
    KIKIKIKIKIKIKIKIKI

    i win :)
     

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