2 I Made Today

Discussion in 'GR Classic Archive' started by 13d Lucidity, Apr 21, 2007.

  1. Apr 21, 2007 at 2:26 AM #1
    13d Lucidity

    13d Lucidity Well-Known Member

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  2. Apr 21, 2007 at 9:10 AM #2
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    Commented on DA :)
     
  3. Apr 21, 2007 at 9:47 PM #3
    Strotha Tynhe

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    the first has great potential, maybe try giving it a more defined focal point. the second on the other hand is a bit empty, repetitive and boring i would recomend some more free flowing shapes
     

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