Read My Story Please :)

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  1. Apr 7, 2007 at 9:33 PM #1
    dotred03

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    I recently opened a site, and I am writing a story. So you need to click the link, becasue I got it set up so when someone talks, its a different color and such. So here it is, and leave feed back:

    http://www.runeforums.net/showthread.php?t=6
     
  2. Apr 7, 2007 at 9:40 PM #2
    Blue_fire

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    Its ok but there are some spelling mistakes, everything else is fine:) nice job
     
  3. Apr 7, 2007 at 10:14 PM #3
    dotred03

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    Thanks :D Glad you liked it :)

    Its one of like 5000000000000000000000000 chapters XD
     

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