1ste Render Of My Whole Life ;). (mario Party)

Original :

Render :

Rates and comments plz B)

 

Nice..It is very good for yor first render.But it is a little choppy down at the end of the yellow crystal.But other than that..Great job!

 

This is a pretty good job for your first cut. It is a little choppy but, its nothing you can't work around

 

Its Nice for your first render but I just see Little mistakes,not a problem though.

 

gr8 cut for first m8, keep at it!

 

Good job on your first one.
Next time try to get rid of all the white marks ^^

 

really nice cut for your first, keep it up

 

Good for our first, the only bit that REALY sticks ut at me is the white on the right side of his hat.

 

Nice one for a first, Get rid of the white bits around mario and it should be orite, Try working with a black background if you havent on this one cause then you can see the white bits around the picture/render.

 

Not bad at all, man. I recommend somewhere like gamewallpapers.com if you want to continue to render gaming picture.

 

I think u did great, like the cut

 

nice

 

yep like the others said... not bad for the 1st time... little white lines but nothing we all didnt do on our first

 

Very good first cut, there are some white parts to it, but it's very good.

Practice make best

 

yes keep working and you will be a RenderMaster
its good for you first render ever keep up the goood work