First Render

I am sure this has been done before but wanted to give rendering a shot. Opinions?

 

Not bad for your first render..
A bit choppy in some places tho

 

any other remarks or suggestions?

 

i think it looks pretty good, nice way to start out

 

For your first render, this is really good, keep up the good work ^_^

 

I took a bit of time, but after reading the tut, I think my next ones wont be choppy. Hope I will be able to make em as good as Blood after a while!!!