My First Render!

mine:
i know thers alot of mistakes espcially by hair but its my first one
original http://www.gamewallpapers.com/wallpapers.p...Hammers+of+Fate
comments plz be nice lol

 

good clean cut man, definitally gonna use this soon

8/10

 

pretty good cut for first definitly the biggest thing u have to fix like you stated before is the hair just zoom in hugelyyy and cut that out its especially hard for me to cut hair cuz i use gimp so i usually choose renders without hair otherwise theres a little outline here and there but besides those things i'd say great cut for your first definitly usable by people gj and keep up the work man practice makes perfect hrm i did notice the copyright sign on the bottom idk if thats allowed to be rendered or not i dont know much bout that rule

 

The cut itself is kinda bumpy, white outline aswell. The hair, can still be rendered a bit more.

If I were you I'd try rendering easier stuff, possibly grand theft auto wallpapers (due to the huge black outlines around the people)

Good luck, practice makes perfect.

 

very nice render i might use

 

Very usable. For a first cut its cool. Cant wait to see more of your work.

 

A lot of areas are a little bit choppy. But since this is your first, it's pretty good.

 

nice first cut better than i could ever do i mean that really

 

not bad man good for your first. just zoom in ALOT on that hair and youll be fine nice cut for your girst good job.

 

nice first cut...way better than my first cut

 

A few choppy areas, but it's great for your first. Also, save it as a transparent PNG next time.

 

err whats that, and i skipped over the hair lol

 

Ok, after cutting, make sure its transparent all around!

File>Save For Web> PNG 128 or soemthign liek that.. the higher the number the better. Make surte you have transparency ticked.. that will give it the see through =]

 

Wow nice its 9/10 thats really good.