You Will Think of Me -Zain When the dawn of your life will be chased by the evening star, And your mind will not be able to fight your heart, You will think of me. When today’s singing birds will not show their activeness, Then every thought of yesterday will give your eternal happiness, You will think of me. When the Sun will rise and shine its light upon you, And the morning birds will flap the wind towards you, You will think of me. When you’re tired steps will need some rest, And the helping hands of a true friend will be the best, You will think of me. When life gives you the deepest sorrows, A friend’s shoulder is one that you will need to borrow, You will think of me. On that dreamy night! When the moon will shine and all is bright, When the rays will come and touch your heart, You will think of me. When Cupid’s arrow will shoot you in the morning, You will come running to me my lady charming, You will think of me. Now this is the moral of the story, Because true love really is everyone’s history, You will think of me. So What do you think about it? :wub: Link to DA: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/46605708/ Zain :mellow:
Way to win her over with being yourself... thats the right way to be </sarcasm> As for the poem, I don't do poetry (as in its not something I enjoy reading) so I wouldn't be able to give you accurate criticism.
