The Cipher

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  1. Lennox

    Lennox Well-Known Member

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    This is the place for freestyle rap battles. Show what you got.
    Remember this is battling, no spitting weak rhymes. Your objective is to show up others.

    RULES
    1. Minimum 4 bars. No maximum.
    2. No editing your posts
    3. No stealing Lyrics

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    1 None of yall can step to me
    2 Lennox, the number one breed of Emcee
    3 You might as well give up now
    4 Cuz theres no way applause will come from the crowd
    5 Its simple, Im a man with a mission
    6 Ive been sent to lyrically put you outa comission
    7 With my pen and paper, Im a lyrical warlord
    8 I kill weak rappers and leave em under my floorboards

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    1 So now you think you rhyme tight?
    2 That you in the limelight?
    3 Snap back and set your mind right
    4 You best believe when i spit in the mic
    5 Overrated? Ya I know the term
    6 Thats what they call you after you crash and burn
    7 Im not sniffing crack, the allegation is wack
    8 Prolly some white boy frontin your black
    9 We can take this anywhere. The lunch room to the tarmac
    10 When Im done, you'll be stuck on yo back
    11 Yo mama never teach you not to talk smack?
    12 Time to run in your 62 hatchback

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    1 Im tha lyrical king, I still wear the crown
    2 Any emcee can step up for the beat down
    3 Area Code 780 is my town
    4 Ill snatch ya mic for tryin to clown
    5 Five lines in, theres no gon back now
    6 ***** niggas better back down
    7 No fo-five to put ya down
    8 Lyrically i provide the superior sound
    9 We can go round for round
    10 And pound for pound
    11 We can trade skill for skill
    12 Only thing you good at is poppin them pills
    13 Your girl made ya take them viagra
    14 I been in this game since Sega
    15 This is rap, its more than poetry
    16 You the biggest joke of the century
    17 I spit so fast, its like im on PCP
    18 Stop frontin like you straight outa CPT
    19 Homeboy still lives in his mamas basement
    20 Face so ugly, he'll need a face lift

    Edited to fix rules*
     
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    1 Step to me? I'll step to you
    2 Lyrically breaking barriers just to show you what I do
    3 You know what overrated is? You havn't got a clue.
    4 Overrated is the sucker that thinks that he is better than the two
    5 The OneTwo check it, spittin bombs real heavy
    6 The lyrical genius sayin' ya'll betta' come get me
    7 Attempt to catch it, before I break you to your casket
    8 The lyrical genius, f^k it you never gon' past it

    :P
     
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    1) cat
    2) hat
    3) fat
    4) bat
    5) brat
    6) gnat
    7) pat
    8) mat
     
  4. [.BC] Spectra

    [.BC] Spectra Well-Known Member

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    1 you think you can break this
    2 jus droppin a few words you cant take this
    3 im a chemical disaster and ill give u to 3
    4 so be out now before ur dissappointed
    5 you aint got no chance here all ur thoughts mis appointed
    6 now stop frontin and get to the bak
    7 lyrical genius my ass
    8 what, you sniffin crack?
     
  5. Lennox

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    1 So now you think you rhyme tight?
    2 That you in the limelight?
    3 Snap back and set your mind right
    4 You best believe when i spit in the mic
    5 Overrated? Ya I know the term
    6 Thats what they call you after you crash and burn
    7 Im not sniffing crack, the allegation is wack
    8 Prolly some white boy frontin your black
    9 We can take this anywhere. The lunch room to the tarmac
    10 When Im done, you'll be stuck on yo back
    11 Yo mama never teach you not to talk smack?
    12 Time to run in your 62 hatchback
     
  6. Lennox

    Lennox Well-Known Member

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    1 Im tha lyrical king, I still wear the crown
    2 Any emcee can step up for the beat down
    3 Area Code 780 is my town
    4 Ill snatch ya mic for tryin to clown
    5 Five lines in, theres no gon back now
    6 ***** niggas better back down
    7 No fo-five to put ya down
    8 Lyrically i provide the superior sound
    9 We can go round for round
    10 And pound for pound
    11 We can trade skill for skill
    12 Only thing you good at is poppin them pills
    13 Your girl made ya take them viagra
    14 I been in this game since Sega
    15 This is rap, its more than poetry
    16 You the biggest joke of the century
    17 I spit so fast, its like im on PCP
    18 Stop frontin like you straight outa CPT
    19 Homeboy still lives in his mamas basement
    20 Face so ugly, he'll need a face lift
     
  7. del_murder

    del_murder Well-Known Member

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    you do realize this is internet... right?
    so this ain't real rap cuz ppl have loads of time to think of their rhymes

    anyways rap sucks!!
     
  8. Lennox

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    Yes, this is the only way.
    If they want to think forever thats fine. I dont bother to do that though, i just come here, play a track on itunes, and use the beat to write my lyrics.

    I dunno why they bother to post, if they wanna think about it, and do research for 20 minutes.
     
  9. Morv

    Morv Well-Known Member

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    I'm sure this doesn't belong in GD, but in OT.
     
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    I liked ONeTwos come back : )
     
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    It also sucks because if you write it to one beat but someone reads it hearing another they don't sound right...
     
  12. MrBear

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    That's true. Truly, I don't like rap/hip-hop that much though. Im white. I have no f@cking idea what they're saying.
     
  13. Lennox

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    Finally an opponent who aint gonna stall
    Real compeition to lyrically brawl
    Anywhere you wanna battle, just gimme a call
    Ill rip ya apart like Arsenio Hall
    n I dont talk greesy like H-Towns Paul Wall
    n my mouth dont shine like a disco ball
    Never rock the gold, silver, and platinum grills
    my breath dont give urrbody cold chills
    But my prescene will turn G niggas into shook ones
    Sippin on metamucil to relieve your runs
    And this aint coincidental
    Its purely sentimental
    You're too young, go get parental consent
    My smooth flow makes niggas content
    You sayin the words but lack the passion
    Rap is the intellects form of fashion
    You sayin you follow a different proclamation
    But ya gotta see the amplifications
    You no different, just follow assimilations
    Ima stop and leave em in anticipation
     
  14. Vodka?

    Vodka? Well-Known Member

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    1) Don't push me cause I'm close to the edge
    2) I'm trying not to lose my head, ah huh-huh-huh
    3) say what?
    4) It's like a jungle sometimes it makes me wonder
    5) How I keep from going under
     
  15. Xed

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    lol The message grandmaster flash..

    My critique is your rhyming to much, i basically have the same problem we used to battle in yahoo chats and there was sum good writers and the advanced ones said not every line neds a rhyme you need to build it up I was doin stuff like this

    We meet on a server, and I say "what's up?",
    when we go at it punk, I'm gonna f**k you up.
    Got you in my sights and I'm gonna make you bleed,
    get used to hearing this, "you have lost the lead."
    Cuz while your camping, I'll be pimp slapping,
    then I'll kick it in, and your ass I'll be stamping.
    I got a Phd in pain and a masters in disaster,
    the mighty Evil King is a f**king Y!Games Master


    Straight out of Stockton a crazy motherf**ker named Evil Don the king.
    When I be rocking the mic you be gawking,
    at me 'cause I'm a bad mama-jamma,
    you wanna lock me up put my ass in the slamma.
    But f**k that s**t 'cause no jail can hold me,
    you can't even catch me much less control me.
    So if you see me coming you better duck,
    'cause Evil Don is crazy as f**k

    These got ripped up by the pros saying its more poetic then rap lol...
     

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