My Poem

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  1. Galione

    Galione Well-Known Member

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    A letter to Emo kids


    Hate is truth and so are the lies
    No fault no reason behind their eyes
    Blank they stare into their hope
    Shrouded by there upbringing they fall
    Stupid they are when they see the truth
    Hateless they think they are
    Yet they can't even love themselves
    Vanity is not a sin but a control
    They exploit an image that need be forgotten
    Hate them I say


    Dusk soon comes on their withered belief
    Self indulgent pricks are they
    I say kill thyself with no reason
    Talk about it anymore and I shall give you the gun
    Faultered ignorance paints your portrait
    Your heart should not beat any longer
    Clouded your head becomes but only at your discretion
    Forbidden is life to you but that's your opinion
    Beauty is not blackened with eyeliner and feeble speech
    Hate them I say


    Do to others but not yourself you say
    Love one another but not yourself you say
    Keep the wealth of life but give it away you say
    Take no heed to the signs of life you say
    Bringer of death come unto me you say
    Self you are not you say
    Keep your enemies in loving arms you say
    Touch of death beats your veins you say
    Hate them I say

    Maybe one day you shall perish
    Rejoice I say when one less is better for all
    Kill yourself and wither away
    grab that knife and cut deep
    Do not hesitate just do it I say
    What are you waiting for keep that devil at bay
    Justify it you will not because you can not
    So smarten up if you find this disturbing and enjoy
    For my hatred for you will go away

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    like I said it's random thoughts sorry if your offended but that's the way it is.
     
  2. Incendia

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    put your poetic skills to a less steryotypical use.
     
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    yup stereotyping is not the way to go
     
  4. c6x Moptop

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    Well i loved it :D
     
  5. Galione

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    That's the least stereotyping I could do for the fools
     
  6. [.BC] Spectra

    [.BC] Spectra Well-Known Member

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    this is like asking for flaming. im not totally emo because i will never be like tht but i do listen to emo music and sometimes dress like it not all the way with the gloves and ---- but yea. rlly lay the fvck off. i mean what u hate them cause their different, does tht mean u also hate blacks cause their different or asians cause theyre different. really man use ur fvcking heart or sometin

    o and ur telling us to go die real nice [-] rep

    "Hate them I say

    Maybe one day you shall perish
    Rejoice I say when one less is better for all
    Kill yourself and wither away"
     
  7. David.

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    Too long, so I'll just go with the flow..

    "Pff, stereotype!"
     
  8. [.BC.] Dr. Pepsi

    [.BC.] Dr. Pepsi Well-Known Member

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    no comment on the content of the poem, but it's kinda nonsensical IMO. O_O
     
  9. Galione

    Galione Well-Known Member

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    lmfao minus -Rep me all you want

    why don't you go ahead and minus rep Mark Twain for his opinions in his writing which i consider to be an art cause he couldcall you a dumb ass you would love it.

    Can't call yourself and artist if you can't take a poets sense of view

    and spectra no I don't hate blacks, I hate racist pricks in every race and yes blacks are the worst but that doesn't mean you should judge them but I have lived around these kids for a long time and they are all, once again THEY ARE ALL self centered pricks.
     
  10. Incendia

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    You don't sound like youv'e ever met any emo or scene kids in your entire life, maybe you should stop listning to random steryotypical bull----.

    most of my friends are "emo" and i am somewhat emo, don't believe in the years iv'e been with the emo/scene/hardcore scene i have ever heard one person talk about suicide, slitting wrists or any of the other typical "emo" steryotypes.

    Honestly, i think your a good poet, and i truley don't think you deserve to be flamed, neg repped or anything of the sort for stating your oppinion, after all it's your poetry.

    i just think it should be YOUR OPPINION.

    try to find a better topic next time you feel like writing poetry. After all, poetry about hatred. Sounds somewhat "emo" to me, wouldn't you say?
     
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    agreed
     
  12. [.BC] Spectra

    [.BC] Spectra Well-Known Member

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    yes it ur opion and ur entitled to ur own opion. but thts rarely how emo people are and u wouldnt hve gotten the minues rep if u didnt say they should die. in my opinion only people who commit certain crimes deserve that. and that is my opinion.
     
  13. [.BC.] altriKdout

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    Spectra is right...I understand that you don't like them, and you have all the right to write this..poem or whatever, but why post it? I'm not emo, but I'm sure that there are some on here, you should've known you'd be bound to offend someone here....but it's also like hating people for no reason? Has an emo kid ever done anything to you? Even if they have, life isn't anything without forgiveness.

    Just please be a little nicer next time. :)
     
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    scene kids ftw.

    i agree with everyone else
     
  15. Galione

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    haha
     

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