It's Me, Babis.

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  1. Nick The Greek

    Nick The Greek Well-Known Member

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    this story was made by me and my friend on another forum and we are updating as fast as we can

    all the names on the story are taken from real people,my friends :D

    i would like you to tell if you like my story :D

    " The CIA had an opening for an assassin. After all of the background checks, interviews, and testing were done there were three finalists — two men and one woman. For the final test, the CIA agents took one of the men to a large metal door and handed him a gun.
    " We must know that you will follow your instructions, no matter what the circumstances. Inside this room you will find your wife sitting in a chair. You have to kill her. " The first man said." You can’t be serious. I could never shoot my wife, "
    The agent replies, " Then you’re not the right man for this job."
    The second man was given the same instructions. He took the gun and went into the room. All was quiet for about five minutes. Then the agent came out with tears in his eyes. " I tried, but I can’t kill my wife. " The agent replies, " You don’t have what it takes. Take your wife and go home. "
    Finally, it was the woman’s turn. Only she was told to kill her husband. She took the gun and went into the room. Shots were heard, one shot after another. They heard screaming, crashing, banging on the walls. After a few minutes, all was quiet. The door opened slowly and there stood the woman. She wiped the sweat from her brow and said, " You guys didn’t tell me the gun was loaded with blanks. So I had to beat him to death with the chair. " Babis said chuckling . Then he looked at the girl sitting next to him .
    "Lol , good one Babis " Sofia , the girl sitting next to Babis , told him laughing too .
    They continued laughing as tearsof laughter run at their faces .
    " ... and maybe mr. Theodosis can answer the question ? " asked the teacher , Mr. Zacharias .
    Sofia giggled silently covering her face with her hands so that Mr. Zacharias could not see her laughing as Babis tried to find out what the question was . Finally , after he understood he could not find it out he said slowly
    " I do not know sir , I haven't heard the question . " he said embarassed .
    Mr. Zacharias looked around the classroom although Babis was sure his eyes were fixed to him . Then he opened his mouth and chose the words he was going to say carefully
    " Mr. Theodosis , you are witted and very gifted , but you lack gravity " Mr.Zacharias said sternly
    I just rolled my eyes and I saw nick who gave me a thumbs up .
    After 30 minutes of more warnings from Mr. Zacharias , he outbursted , 5 minutes before the finish of the lesson
    " YOU CAN'T BE 19 YEARS OLD AND BEHAVE LIKE THAT ! YOU SHOULD BETTER BEHAVE YOURSELVES OR ... "
    well Ghigas interupted him and said " or ??? are you threatening us , sir "
    Mr. Zacharias answered angrily " how dare you ? "
    And then their fight went on and on even continued when the class was dismissed .
    Nick came running to Babis . He was holding 2 gums .
    " Wanna one ? " he asked
    Babis took one . And then with a look at Mr. Zacharias he said " University teachers - gits really "
    Nick chortled and said " I've got news Babis "
    " What ? " asked Babis
    " Well loads of managers resigned . " he said
    " Kk . I'm not interested really " Babis said as he opened the door to enter another classroom - Nick was following him - for an university lesson , this time with Ms. Papadimitriou .
    As Babis entered the morale of his took a deep downhill .
    " One - seat desks . " he thought ...
    Babis asked “ Where will we sit? ”There were only two one-person desks available.
    Nick said “lets seat sit here” And they sat at the desks.Babis was in the front desk and Nick was behind him.
    Gikas came running towards them. He said“Quick let’s get the f**k outta here,fellaz.I kicked professor’s butt and he is searching fo’ me”
    Babis and Nick were staring at Gikas. Babis said“Ok let’s get outta here.I hate this lesson ”
    Nick said“ok but silently”
    They left the classroom.Then Gikas caught with the corner of his eye Sofia. Nick asked her “What classroom are you supposed to be?”
    “Mrs Papadopoulou. I hate her, and I think she hates me!!!!!!!” Sofia said
    Gikas told them “Stop this disscusion. We have to get outta here right now!. I can hear footsteps nearby.”
    They ran down the stairs and the left the building. They went to Babis’ house which was the nearest. When they entered the apartment, they sat on the sofa and started to talk.
    “Why did you left your classroom?” Sofia asked
    “I kicked the professor on the butt ” Gikas told her
    “I was bored” Babis told them
    “I dunno why” Nick told
    They talked about the exams, the subjects, soccer and many other things.
    They were trying to think a funny thing to do the next day to the professors.
    They talked for about an hour and then they left Babis’ house. It was noon.It was the time their professor,Mrs Soroga,was returning home. They were very unlucky that they met her!
    She said “What the hell are ya fellaz doin’ here this time? As far as I am concered you didn’t show up for my lesson today. Where da hell have ya been?”
    Nick said “I…I…..I….I…I felt sick and went home.”
    Sofia told her “ I accompanied Nick to his house”
    Gikas told her “ I accompanied Sofia who accompanied Nick who felt sick……”
    Soroga gave them a strange view and left.
    Nick told “How about going to skate?I learned a new trick!”
    Gikas said to Nick “Nah, I don’t think so.Let’s go to the cinema, Pirates of the Caribbean 2 is out!”
    Sofia didn’t know what to say so she agreed with both.
    All in a sudden, Nick’s mobile phone rang. It was Anna. She said she won’t be able to come to the cinema cos she was grounded.She had ripped her professor’s ,Ladikas’, shirt.
    She said she would really like to go to the movies with them,and she would try to sneak outta her house in the evening
    Nick told “OK,I’ll buy a ticket fo’ ya .In case u don’t show up ,I’ll call Gino to come.He’s so funny”
    Everyone went to their home.
    Nick skated in his back yard,Sofia practiced her English and Gikas played PS2 games.
    The time went by and it was 9 o’clock.Gikas,Babis,Nick and Sofia met outside the cinema. They arrived at the cinema about 15 minutes before the movie start.10 mins went by, and they were waiting for Anna.9:10, 9:11, 9:12, 9:13. The movie would start in 2 mins. Nick told the others “Go and see the movie.I’ll wait for Anna 10 more mins and if see doesn’t show up, I’ll come inside”
    They went inside.Nick stood alone waiting for Anna . The time was 9:31. Nick though she wont show up.He started to walk to the cinema, when he heard a voice screaming “Nick.Nick wait”
    Nick turned around and saw Anna running towards him in blood!!
    Nick pinched himself to see if what he saw was true . Yes it was . Anna covered in blood having a big wound at her forearm . Nick ran towards her .
    " What happened ? " Nick asked her
    " Nothing , nothing important let's go see the movie " she said
    " No way . You are covered in blood . Tell me please I'll help you " Nick said looking Anna encouragily .
    " Ok . As I tried to sneak out I fell off my balkon . There were a glass bottle at the ground and as I feel my forearm broke it . I might still have glass bits in my forearm " Anna said her vision blur , her eyes crying
    " Do not worry I'll help you " said Nick heaving Anna into his shoulder .
    He left her outside pharmacist's as nick went in .
    " The girl outside is badly injured . Can I bring her here and can you give her the first aids ? " asked nick
    " OK fast if she's badly injured " said the pharmacist .
    Nick brought Anna in sitted at a sofa and started meaningless . He hoped Anna would become ok and that her parents would not understand a thing . Something which was impossible as he knew .

    The cinema was filled as the movie moved towards the end . Sofia loved the as it had some very romantic scenes . She closed her eyes and imagined herself staring at a movie kissing Nick .
    Her hand automaticly was extended and touched a hand .
    " What the hell ? " Babis muttered
    " Oops , I thought Nick was sittin here " Sofia said embarassed
    " What happened to him anyway ? And do you have a crush on him ? " Babis asked as a know-it-all .
    " I'll tell you later " Sofie said
    " The movie ended . It was good but a bit over-romantic " said gikas .
    " Yep . Come on guys move " said Gino

    " OK now we gotta find nick and then go to goodys and have a snack " Babis said
    " Agreed " said Sofia

    After 20 minutes they spotted him outside the pharmachy with anna who was throwin her blood clothes to a trash bin .
    She looked fine but if you examined her carefully her face expressions were the one of pain when she moved her left hand
    " Guyz why didn't you come to the movie ? It was loads of fun . Jack Sparrow's hair was like ---- in a mixer " Gino said
    Babis and gikas burst out laughing

    Nick explained to everyone what happened to anna and then as they were at goody's sofia stood up.
    " Can I talk to you nick ? Private ? " she asked
    " Yes sure " said Nick
    Sofia turned her head towards Babis who gave her a wink

    Nick and Sofia went ou of goody's at a park which was silent and quiet
    " Nick I want to tell you that what you did today for Anna was really courageous " she said
    Nick was actually going to open his mouth to reply when sofia approached him
    They were really closed . As Sofia's lips touched nick's he forgot what he wanted to say
    He just gave in . After a passionate kiss which lasted five minutes , they kissed again and again
    Then they went back to goody's

    Proffesor Ladikas was nearby at a balkony he had a camera . he recorded the kiss
    " Let's see what their parents will say about those two kissing " he muttered an evil smile appearing at his face .
    The guys were waiting at the goodys’ for about 20 minutes.When Nick and Sofia stopped kissing, they talked.
    “I’m in love with you Nick” Sofia told Nick
    “I like you,too. You’re smart and cute”Nick told her
    They kissed again.They heard Babis screaming “Nick, Sofia where are you guys?Its about time to leave”
    “We’re coming” Nick told
    “I say not to go there” Sofia whispered in Nick’s ear.
    “Then what should we do?”Nick whispered.
    Sofia grabbed Nick’s hand and whispered to him “follow me”
    She started to run to the other way.
    Babis was about to start chasing them when he heard Gino sceaming “Babis come here.Someone is looking for you”
    Babis remembered that Sofia had a crush on Nick , so he left the two of them alone.
    He started walking to see who was waiting for him.Gino told him “a girl with long golden hair and tiny cute brown eyes. I dunno who she is, but you’ll probably know her coz she know you,but there’s a chance that you wont know her,she would probably talked to you once or twice or……..”
    “OK,OK,OK,OK I understood.A girl is waiting for me.I’m coming”
    “OK. Thank god, you understood” Gino told him
    He went in front of the goodys’ and saw Angela, a girl who Babis have met in another university.
    He had a crush on her!!
    She had a crush on him too,but they couldn’t be together cos they were living too far away.
    “Hey” Babis told her and his face was turning red.
    “I came here to say that I love you!!!I moved here cos I love you since the first time I met you”
    Babis face went completely red.He started to say “You lov…..”
    Angela with her hand covered his mouth and told him not to talk and to close his eyes
    Babis did so and Angela kissed him for approximately 6 minutes.
    They would continue kissing but Gino interrupted them, telling “Alkis has been kidnapped”
    babis stopped kissing angela at the spot
    " what ? when did you learn it ? " he asked
    " now , an sms came " gino said
    " well then m8 they are jking " Babis said
    " I'll call to see if it is true " Gino suggested
    " You do so " Babis said
    Angela was concerned about Alkis too though she did not know him
    Babis stroked her long blonde hair as they wait for gino to make the call , anxious
    " Hey babe , gimme a minute ok ? " Babis asked Angela
    " Ok " she said
    Babis went to the mens WC and called nick
    Nick was kissing with Sofie
    However he answered the phone
    " Yep ? "he said
    " Hey Babis here " Babis said
    " Ok , you know why we left right ? " Nick asked
    " Yes but sorry to burst your bubble you have to come back "
    " Why ? "nick asked
    " Alkis is probably kidnapped " Babis said
    " What ? We're coming hang on " nick said
    " OK " said Babis
    ...
    Babis ran to where Angela and Gino were
    " Babis " said Angela her sweet hand touching his " he is kidnapped " she finished the sentence sad
    Gino nodded
    Nick and Sofie came panting too
    " Gino you know more ? " Babis asked trying to be calm
    " Oh yes they sent me anotha SMS " he said giving his phone to babis " Read it "
    Babis hand shook as he gave the mobile phone to Angela
    Gino thought that if love was crime he would be dead for sure .
    As he gazed to the beatiful girl called Angela to the sweet blonde bushy haired sofie
    he understood he loved em both
    He should do something to make them break up with Babis and Nick
    Suddenly Gikas and Anna came from their table they just finished eating their burgers
    " What happened ? " said gikas seeing their anxiety
    Angela gave him the mobile phone of gino so he saw the SMS and she hugged Babis .
    When Gikas read the message he gave the mobile phone to Nick and sprinted towards the exit of goodys
    " What are you doing ? " nick asked
    " I'm gonna try and save him , alone if I must " Gikas said
    " I'm coming with you " Angela said
    " Me too " Babis said
    Anna said nothing but followed suit
    Sofie and Nick seemed reluctant but they too followed
    They reached the place were alkis was supposed to be kidnapped according to the SMS
    They heard Alkis screaming " NOOOOOOOOOOO "
    “NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO”
    They all thought it was Alkis. They reached the place the voice came from and they saw Alkis playing a video game with a friend of his,Kordos. He screamed noooooo cos he was losing on the game.
    He said ‘em he was kidnapped cos there was no other way they were coming there.
    When Gikas saw him , he placed his hands around Alkis,and almost chocked him.
    If it wasn’t for Nick,Babis, and the other being there, Gikas would have killed him.
    They managed to keep Gikas away from Alkis.
    Nick had grabbed Gikas’ arms and Babis his feet.
    Gikas shouted “leave my f***ing arms alone, u f***r”
    He kicked Babis away and kicked Nick in his “weak” place
    Nick fell down and Sofia went above him.
    Kordos took out a pistol.( :eek: )
    He said nobody move.Nick couldn’t move so he stayed still with Sofia.
    Babis said “And why should we do that?”
    Then Kordos shot on the air.Everyone apart from Gikas stayed still, with their hands on the air. Gikas took out his pistol and started shooting Alkis. 5 times on the head……( :eek: )
    Kordos ran away. He almost turned around the corner, when Gikas sot his legs twice each.
    Kordos fell down. Gikas went above him. He aimed at his head.
    He was ready to shoot, when Babis ran and hit Gikas and threw him down.
    They started fighting but Nick, whose “weak” place recovered, separated ‘em.
    He said “All of ya shut up” and he kicked Gikas in his stomach, and took his gun.
    He aimed Gikas on his head. He didn’t shoot him.he threw the gun as away as he could.
    He started sayin “so now…..”
    They heard police sirens. All of ‘em run away apart from kordos, who couldn’t even stand on his feet.
    Gikas grabbed him and ran away on the opposite way of the others.
    Nick,Babis,Alkis and the others went into the Goodys’ and they were on their way to the the 3rd floor. On the last 3-4 steps Gino stopped and said “ ----!!!!!i forgot to order my burger” Babis punched him and he moved along.Then Nick stopped and said “Hey y’all stop there NOW!!!Remember last year when Gikas told us about his twin brother?He told us he was on drugs and he was being chased by the police.Also he gave us a picture of him and he looked exactly like Sotiris Gikas”
    “Yeah you are right”Babis told him
    “Nice sweety” Sofia told and she kissed Nick
    “Sotiris might be in trouble!!!!” Gino told and they all ran down the stairs and out of the Goodys.They ran the way Gikas and Kordos ran in order to find them. They tried to find the way they followed when Aggeliki saw some blood on the floor.They thought it was either Gikas’s or Kordos’s.
    They followed the blood and they found theirselves on Gikas’s apartment.
    Nick wondered “Should we go in there or not?”
    Everyone said yes so he couldn’t disagree and he went in.It was not like they remembered from the last time they visited Gikas.It had some traps for bears on the walls and it was covered in blood!
    Aggeliki couldn’t face that house any more and she bended on Babis’s Shoulder and she closed her eyes.Sofia hugged Nick and she put her face on Nick’s breast in oreder not to see the bloods.Nick hugged her too.
    They were searching the living room, when a door blast open and Gikas’s twin came out with a shotgun and 3 other really muscled guys .Gino suggested running away but Babis stopped him and waited for Gikas to say something.
    Gikas barged “I know I’m lost.I know you called the police.I KNOW EVERY SINGLE S***T HAPPENING IN THIS CITY !!!! I’M THE POLICE, I’M THE SUPERHEROES!I’M EVERYTHING
     
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    wow. I cant believe I read that hole thing. Most ive ever read in my life lol.

    Well the story is good and very long
     
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    wtf is this ----.
    go away.
     
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    lol i hate reading so no :P
     
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    oh
    i forgot to say
    that story is for the people tha like reading XD
     
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    looks good ill read itlater ;)
     
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    when you finish reading

    pzl tell me if ya like it XD

    ill make somw updates soon :D
     
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    I respect you mav but that was inappropriate. this is a general discussion board and he is free to post his literature here.
     
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    Oh well. Bad mood.
    Figured it was off-topic. How wrong I was.
     
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    interesting.
    i have yet to read it but it seems interesting
     
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    most of it dont make since prolly cuz of alot of the grammer but it wasnt bad... i guess
     
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    i got lost on the first like, 2 minutes
     
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    I started reading the beginning, but then I was like, "ah, screw it." xD
     
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    Uhhh no...
     
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    lol wtf
     

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