3/10, looks like you brushed BG and the added everthing, it need blending... 6/10 Looks okay, adjust your lightning a bit more, create some more depth and use another font GJ! @ J-dub, smokey effect? You mean smudge?
lolz my two tags are good the bottom one is a banner <_< top one is a kick ass one anyways 2/10 try using smudgin instead of brushing same for the second one Zain