First Submitted Render, Trigun Awesome!

Havent done much rendering before, please leave c&c help me improve my skill.

Orginal

 

Pretty nice cut. There's a bit of glowish outline on his left arm and the cross that it intersects with.

 

A little glow on the one arm, still good cuts.

 

You picked a bad picture to cut due to the drawing style. The edges could use some work.

 

everything's ok for me. definitely usable :]

 

thanks for the coments, ill try to do the next one better

 

theres an outline

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theres an outline