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way too many loose ends to fix. look at how much crap is left around the render. here's a tip. go into your .psd, right click the render layer and do blending options. then tick stroke and leave the options at default. that'll show you real quick where you screwed up.
A little bit of dirt around the render in places ; but a considerable effort for your 2nd render! Keep it up!
Please provide a clickable direct site link to your original image(not image host link) and rehost your render.