heres my first template i ever made. so i can use some hint and instruction for wut i should to next and so on. http://icexg.ic.funpic.org/testing
Amazing for your first. Try making the banner a little bigger though. Also try maybe introducing some new colours too it. At the moment it's very bright. Try changing the font on the Current News etc... Oh yea.. just noticed the logo, it's nice. Bring those colours into the template. Nice work!
a lot of things wrong with it, but the main thing is the pattern overlay on the content boxes ^^ dont use pattern overlays that strong unless you know what you're doing ^^
awsome for a first temp. I have to say, i just like to add some critic. my first thoughts: some stuff is pixlated. The white makes it a little boreing I love the black bar on the top and the logo. I think you should use that style to make it cooler
wow thats amazing for a first! It definately could use improvement though. theres nothing really special about it that makes it stand out. keep it up though and let that imagination wander.
That's not your logo, I know i've seen it before. Also, it's obvious you used clantemplates.com is a guide, which is good, but that's way too similar.