Out Of Touch

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  1. Oct 17, 2006 at 4:56 PM #1
    Evolved

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    [​IMG]

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  2. Oct 17, 2006 at 8:08 PM #2
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    Its ok, its kind of plain, but good job m8 ^_^
     
  3. Oct 18, 2006 at 12:00 PM #3
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    It could use another image. But Fine. Nice Job G
     
  4. Oct 18, 2006 at 5:49 PM #4
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    Thanks for the comments! This is only my third peice, and while i understand the rendering aspect, im quite baffled as of what to do after i get it on the page. I agree, its way to plain, but have no idea what to add. Can anyone give me some ideas, point me in the direction of some tutorials for this kind of thing, or give me some examples of work that demostrate something I could do? If anyone would be willing to do that, i'd be greatly appreciative.

    Also, any ideas of what to do with the colors? Im pulling up a blank...

    I would like to leave the stage of C4D LP Noob-ed-ness as soon as possible :D
     
  5. Oct 18, 2006 at 6:55 PM #5
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    Well now that you've mentioned the coloring scheme, I suggest that you make the over all image darker, and add darkness to the details. since the one corner of the image is lighter than anything.
     
  6. Oct 19, 2006 at 10:48 PM #6
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    Out Of Touch V3

    Comment on DA please on what i can work on. Hopefully the last version.
     
  7. Oct 21, 2006 at 12:36 AM #7
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    way too pointy and sharp, and not enough going on

    but wow for V3, its so good :D
     
  8. Oct 21, 2006 at 7:59 AM #8
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    Looks really nice. Good job. I'm not sure which version i like the best :)
     
  9. Oct 24, 2006 at 7:27 PM #9
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    it looks ok to me, don't have anything to say that hasn't already been said. I just have one question, did you make the metallic thing?
     

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