My First Render

Hey.
this is my first render..
i hope u enjoy it..
dont ask for rep or creds

Render :



Original :

http://www.gamewallpapers.com/viewwallpape...Quest&nummer=01

 

That is... not bad gj for your first. It's not that choppy but try to get rid of those white spots

 

There are white specs allalong the bottom of his skirt and one individual spec below his shield... :? Great first though.

 

choppy arround the skirt

 

Thanks

 

realy nice for a first render

 

not bad for your first cut

 

a bit choppy on the bottom
but good job for your first

 

choppy around the skirt chest chin and i believe u cut some of the helmet on the inside

but good render

 

his ass is kinda choppy other then that it's good

 

really good for your first besides the bottom being a bit choppy it's good and still very usable

 

You missed a dot under his shield. And you should try to get rid of the white outlines to improve your rendering skill.

 

Great job for a first cut.