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  1. Boxiom

    Boxiom Well-Known Member

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    Making it for a website for a project at school.
    Making comics..wee.

    Ignore the "photoshop creative" text.

    The little bubble at the top right will change what it says in it , it time you reload

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    no.
     
  3. Boxiom

    Boxiom Well-Known Member

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    2 words

    negative rep.
     
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    not my fault that you over-use non-text fonts while mis-aligning the news bar and under sizing the sidebar and using over-size and over-used text in it
     
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    You can't -rep someone for giving criticism. You won't go far in life if you can't accept a bit of criticism. Xero3009 report him to rep abuse mate.
     
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    it doesn't matter :P, I couldn't care less about some reputation feature on a website, I have bigger problems, if he can't handle critique, that's his problem, and luckily not mine :)
     
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    no.


    Thats not criticism, buddy.
     
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    i agree its not criticsm its spam ... ^^

    altough hes right
     
  9. Equivalent Exchange

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    It needs work.

    Like I always say to everyone, try a very light, subtle gradient along the top of the background.

    For the banner, the darker yellow bellow the rest of the yellow doesn't feel right to me, I think you should remove it. Put a light gradient over the yellow instead.

    The Alba font in the navigation needs to go I think. There's too much use of it. Verdana instead maybe?

    Same with the page title text, ditch Alba, try Verdana.

    The Box for the page title also needs to be nudged a pixel right, buts that's a small detail.

    Content area definitely needs to be changed from Alba. Alba isn't a font supported on all computers. Because of that, to make sure Alba is the font seen on all computers, you'd need to make the content an image itself, something you don't want to do. It would be possible with CSS to see if Alba is on the computer and use it if it is, and use something else if not, but for the purpose of uniformity, I wouldn't go that route.

    Try adding a horizontal rule/line above and below the text content area.

    "Read comic" doesn't look great in red.

    For the ads to the size, reduce the amount of padding between the ad edges and the box the ads are in. Alba will work in the ads I think, but spruce the rest of them up a bit.

    Copyright?

    That's all for now. Its late, and I need sleep :tongue:.

    I like the little stick figure guy up in the top corner though :)

    Hope that helps you out.
     
  10. Boxiom

    Boxiom Well-Known Member

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    K ill work on that, Thanks :D
     
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    >>> It looks pretty darn nice IMO.
     
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    I want a xlink shirt
    its nothing special but lets be honest, you'll get a 6 for it or something at school.

    I love the little dude on the right top corner
     
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    Text and colour need improving also keep it up loving the layout.
     
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    let's see..well,not that good,nothing too special.i just like your funny idea and that "wee"
     
  15. Boxiom

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    I will most likely get a 100. My teacher doesnt know jack ---- about computers in my web design class. She has to teach everyone how to "save a document in frontpage".

    Everyone is making little stupid hello world in bold font while im coding like Doom 4
     

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