My First Render! Sniper!

Discussion in 'GR Classic Archive' started by ethanxxx, Aug 21, 2006.

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  1. Aug 21, 2006 at 11:49 AM #1
    ethanxxx

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  2. Aug 21, 2006 at 1:03 PM #2
    DraveN

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    please provide a clickable direct site link to your original image and rehost your render.
     
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  4. Aug 21, 2006 at 3:18 PM #4
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    It's already been modified and putted according to the rules...

    So now take a look at it and tell me what u think! Give me some tips to improve if you see it's too bad... (Go easy on me... it's my first one! xD)

    Hope u like it!

    P.D.: I've noticed that the render looks chopy in the forum... so download it and then take a look at it... xD
     
  5. Aug 22, 2006 at 5:17 AM #5
    Naej

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    some choppy areas but its a good cut. nice start
     
  6. Aug 22, 2006 at 3:19 PM #6
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    It's pretty good. Your logo is choppy lol.
     
  7. Aug 22, 2006 at 4:51 PM #7
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    its ok abit choppy and there is a white line
     
  8. Aug 22, 2006 at 5:18 PM #8
    ethanxxx

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    No, if you download it the line goes away... at least it does it in my PC, and about the logo, I know it's choppy, that's the idea! xD no really, It was like 3am and didn't really wanted to make a logo, so that's a TEMPORARY LOGO xD
     
  9. Aug 23, 2006 at 1:52 AM #9
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    not usable but great cut for first :P
     
  10. Aug 23, 2006 at 3:40 AM #10
    ethanxxx

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    Thx for being so honest aggballe2k6 xD I´ll try harder next time :P any advices? wich tool do u use?
     
  11. Aug 24, 2006 at 6:09 AM #11
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    Some white lines but overall good job.
     
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