My Poem.

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  1. KliddY

    KliddY Active Member

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    It's not done and i just started it but i want as many people as possible to rate it. And how i thought of all this stuff is that, i put myself in other peoples shoes who have this problem. Thanks.

    "The drugs have gotten to me
    Day by day
    Kids go out go out
    'Cause it's time to play

    Close the door
    Make sure it's locked
    Got a gun in my hand
    And it's already ----ed.

    This is my last breath
    And my final lap
    If you look deep enough in my heart
    I have a bullet gap.

    This time I'll get the job done
    Whats said is said
    And whats did is done
    So it's about time i raise my gun"

    -KlidDy
     
  2. JayNJN5

    JayNJN5 Well-Known Member

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    Nice job, good rhymes. :)
     
  3. KliddY

    KliddY Active Member

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    Thanks :D
     
  4. .bOdY

    .bOdY Well-Known Member

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    LOL yea its good
     
  5. Virus15

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    Cool poem, I'll post some of my songs in the future
     
  6. Gfx Vipa

    Gfx Vipa Well-Known Member

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    Too emo lol.
     
  7. .bOdY

    .bOdY Well-Known Member

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    Hey..some emo is good
     
  8. KliddY

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    Yes some emo is good cause specially i have been writing "love" poems for people who are going out. (They wanted me too) Yea so i got sick of writing the love stuff. Now its something opposite. And i want to make one about the american troops in Iraq
     
  9. .bOdY

    .bOdY Well-Known Member

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    POST MORE..
     
  10. KliddY

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    MOre poems or more post more top get higgher posts.?
     
  11. Gaara_lover

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    It's kinda funny, but it's really good!
     
  12. KliddY

    KliddY Active Member

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    Thanks :D I appreciate the comments guys ;)
     
  13. Luno

    Luno Well-Known Member

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    Pretty good
     
  14. fusion.

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    Agreed ^
     
  15. 1.000 Watts

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    Very nice.... [+] Rep for the fellow Poet.
     

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