New Background(with Abstract)

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  1. FaLsEhOPe

    FaLsEhOPe Well-Known Member

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    FaLsEhOPe Well-Known Member

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    Now with out abstract render please give opinions first wallpaper (gave cred to creator or the render of the two people
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    and the one for my school poster design [​IMG]
     
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    i luv it but that border dsnt look good in your wallpaper
     
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    What you should have done was get RID of the dude and keep the abstract :)

    Also, the whole thing is one color, too gloomy.

    Still good.

    You also need to work on a better border. (I might write a tut on it when I have time)
     
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    its for a novel my creative writing class is doing this semister and my teacher asked us (class) to get people to design the cover so i thought why not try it so the abstract yes would have looked awsome and it does trust me but i wanted it to have a certain feel towards the title (smiling through tears) but thanks for input cred/rep would be aprediated
     
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    looks good man the one without the abstract render looks better imo

    evan
     
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    nicew
     
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    looks very good. Great job 9/10
     
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    i think you better use more colors...
     
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    more variation in colour would improve it a lot, you should try and blend it more as well.

    apart from that its pretty cool but not my style so 6.5/10
     

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