orignial, renderd at renderworld.com vectored. this is my first, be nice! Merged Post: bump, please coment
Looks nice. That outer white line doesnt look to good, give it a gaussian blur or something, smoothen it up. Good job.
The colors could be a little better but I'm not good with colors either The lips are very red lol and he is very dark... Some of the shading could be more detailed but for your first I wouldn't even think of messing with it. I'm surprised you did the few shadings that you currently have. Looking very good m8. Keep it up.
Nice job, maybe the hand can be improved by adding more shadow? Still excellent job at first vector. Xuck