My Very First Car Render

ok this is my first car render, I kinda messed up on the front a little bit.

Here is the original

Here is my render:

 

moved to non-gaming

 

good, but a little bitt choppy

 

It's alright... that tire is gone though...

 

bit choppy but keep it up !!!

 

i like it well done i may spiff the cut up abit beforei use but if i do i will post and cred you ^^.

 

the wheels are choppy

 

A bit choppy, the front tire is completely messed up and you missed a bit under the wing, nice try.

 

Aww, well thanks for posting... the tires are very choppy but it's a great job for a first render. Look foward to you posting some new ones, you'll get better with experience.^_^

Thanks for the render anyways,
Snipe.

 

Theres room for improvement. Not that i could do much better but there are some ruff spots. Not bad at all for being your first render.

Thanks

 

the first wheel was cutted badly..

 

nice work!

keep on trying on the wheels
but great render!

thx for sharing!

 

Nice try a little bit choppy