I'll rate the second one its better IMO. Good: render blends really well, nice border, Cool Text! Good use of C4D nice dim color. Good flow. Bad: White parts stand out to much. Thats Pro! 9/10.
thanks super for proving it sucks =] and the looks to messy minus the newest ones. currents - 4/10 newests - 7/10
ooo thnx 6/10 - bit simple for my liking 6.5/10 - bttr then first. colours are ok, but dun like tech too much