Command & Conquer 3 - Tiberian Wars

My first Render ever, I hope you like it.
If you have any comments or tips for me, plz tell me. ^_^


It's a Render of 2 Zone Troopers from the not yet finished game Command and Conquer 3 - Tiberian Wars



The original picture is from www.planetcnc.com but you can find it at almost any Command and Conquer websites.http://pnmedia.gamespy.com/screenshots/pcnc/30641564.jpg
(It's a big picture so loading could take some time)

 

That looks a bit choppy and the quality isnt very nice either

 

I know and I know

But I must start somewhere with renders.

 

It's a bit choppy in places and I don't really like the render, but you've gotta start somewhere.

 

any tips to make pictures less choppy?

 

cutting is ok not great, still done a nice job.

 

Tnx ^_^