v1: v2: CnC...i got bored and it was late so i just threw one together. i know it's simple, but i like the colors if you're interested in buying, let me know
Loose the drop shadows and work on your colour schemes. Try looking at the pineed threads in this section. Keep trying.
yeah the drop shadows turn the opicity down some, and try making all the gradients lighter and try some more simple bold fonts, check out dafont.com, keep trying good work
A little simple, but everyone else was right about the drop shadow they hurt my eyes too dark and also your text is hard to read need to pick a diff color prob white