eh. the text could use a little work, and the only effect I see is the rippling. a little more work, some other things going on and it would be pretty good. keep it up ^_^
too overcontrasted. and its too dirty on MC. it looks as if u forced the blue coloring on MC, but i didnt work out so great. might wanna make the "bean" text smaller, and maybe in times new roman, or a simple text. its too chaotic.
Hehe not particularly, I think it's an awsome game, but I don't have an X-Box I love the renders though, they work very well in sigs ^_^