Done 1000 Times Before

Well, for those of you who have observed my progress, you can see that I am improving with each render I do. I spent roughly 4 hours on this, and it has came out decent. I am well aware that it has been done before, and I know that people out there have done it 10 times better than me, but this is my fifth render, and I would appreciate it VERY much if you all would not comment on how it has been done before, just stick to the criticism, and hopefully the compliments.

PLEASE TAKE INTO ACCOUNT THAT THIS IS ONLY MY FIFTH RENDER. ENLARGE IT TO VIEW ALL OF IT'S DETAILS OTHERWISE THE HAIR PIXELS ARE TOO CLOSE TO EACHOTHER AND MAKE THE RENDER LOOK CHOPPY WHEN IT ISN'T. IF YOU LIKE THIS A LOT, PLEASE FEEL FREE TO UP MY CREDITS . THANK YOU.

Here's the link...

My Disgressions
-Hair could use some work.
-Need to remove that text at the bottom.
-Render is kinda choppy in some areas for some reason.

My Likes
-For someone who has only rendered 5 times, I am doing well.
-It is a decent render, not the best, but good for me.

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Good render,may a little choppy on the Right side of the hair, but hair is generally hard to work with

thumbs up

 

Well what can I say...

It's very good which is a Pro
and it's also very good for a fifth which is als a Pro

The only thing that isn't really good about it is the little bit of choppiness on the right.
But overall its very good and I am going to try to use it as best i can.
Thanks. ^_^

 

its mad nice.
And BIG!!! thx

 

quite choppy.. for a 5th render, u could be doing better, but not too bad..

 

sweet i love this one man

 

Awesome render! :lol:

 

This was the first render I made. B) Yours came out tons better'n mine. xD

Awesome job. But how did you get the hair perfect and the rest of the body all choppy and blocky? =P

 

Thank you all. I do agree that it is a bit choppy, but it's nice.

 

Nice cut. Large render.

 

Thank you. Sorry about it's size.

 

Yeah, that looks nice. The hair is alittle choppy but hair is hard to cut.

 

nice render

 

Thank you again. Yes, especially when a lot of the hair in this render was 1 pixel wide. If you would like to see 1 pixel, look at the dot in the "I" I am about to place for you...

That was very difficult, although it makes me happy to say that the hair came out well for the most part, and that it got thicker as we move closer to the ROOT of the hairs.

 

Yeah, it has been done a lot but yours is the best I've seen so far.