C4d Tag

well i recently bought the tim0z c4d pack and they are amazing. this is my outcome and i was wonderin what the people in the forum think of it. it is my first c4d sig without a render in it too. please give comments to improve and what not. thank you. also pick ur favorite version

v1:

v2:

v3:

 

Hmm, The flow is nice, but I dont like the lens flare... Its way to bright IMHO.

 

i brushed in white to make more of a focus point. but thanks for ur comment

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i added another verison

 

I like the lensflare, just what you say now you have a focus point and that makes it pretty nice, gj!

 

You did an awesome job man. But sharpen the tag, its to blurry.

 

Nice one, I like v1 more, but I would unblur the textsquare.

 

thanks for urcomments . and i blurred the square trying to get it to look like it is attached to the sig and coming off but i dont think it worked so well

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added v3

 

Hum... IMO v2 is the best, i think it has some more depth. It looks great, good job =)

BTW, how do you blend the C4D renders? it looks like bubbles. I have tried to do it but my outcomes aren't like that =(

 

Very nice, I like the flow and the colors are awesome. But eh, where did you get that C4D render at? It's awesome

Anyways you did an awesome job... maybe sharpen it up a bit or darken it... but other than that it's really good. Keep up the good work man

 

thanks for ur comments. and they are tim0z's c4d renders.

 

looks nice, like v1 the best

 

gj on all of them i say

 

Nice job. Could you give a linky to the C4Ds? They look awesome.

If it were me, I would make the flare more intense near the bottom, to make it look more like a flare, but thats just me.

 

pretty awsome, dont like the white tho

 

dunno about the typo, or focal point.