i cant see the first attached image (if any), but on the second the render doesnt quite fit in. all the red arround it doesnt work well with it. still looks like it has a prommising future if you decide to play with the colors. keep it up
ye i do, its a rather nice horror. by playing with colors i didnt mean ditch the red, i mean make the render fit better if you remember the box and poster, it was entirely red. not that you should make it that boring, but at least slightly remind of that