First one: its very messy and misses direction... 4. Second: the random brightness disrupts the flow and ruins the lightning. the text is a bit dull, and the bg could use some work too 5 EDIT: to rate mine, take the first two in my photobucket (myTAGS) ^_^
lol im lazy anywho, the first one gets a 7 from me nice flow, nice composition, decent text and... lightnings... well... decent second, though... looks distorted at the head, and i dont like the effects it gives. 5