I Think I Did A Tiny Bit Better, I Still Have To Improve Alot Though GIVE ME SOME TIP'S ON RENDERING IMAGES PLEASE Original Render:
Do you use the eraser tool? If you do, use the polygonal lasso tool or the pen tool. Yes, there are a lot of white spots. Try again and do better next time.
wow that is a very hard and detailed lookin render and you cut it out pretty much perfectly awesome job.
You need to clean up the hair a bit, and work on some of the choppyness, but overall it could be useable