need some C+C on this peice tell me if there is somin that really needs improving. no one say smooth the render out, I wanted to create somin rough and jaggedy. EDIT: Just removed text.
Looks kinda blurry and grainy, and the text is, erm, no offewnce but awful. =/ I would like to see some blending on the main concept somewhere, and some mroe lightning+flow. The bg could be more attractive aswell. Altough, i <3 the colors
Can never do text so I will work on that I think. I dont think the image is grainy. Forgot to say, no one say smooth the render out, I wanted to create somin rough and jaggedy. I will work on text though.
It looks... euhm... different. I think that the whole c4d (or w/e that is) should be blended more. but it's not bad