Hum. in my opinion render is to blurry... Remember to add a border to your sig, it will make it look much better
bit blurred.. also i dont think the txt is the best and the border/yellow stripes are out of place! the right side looks interesting!
I kinda like it... It's original and that's important The text could be better and the render is a little to blurry... The sig is a little bit empty (my opinion)