Make the angle of the text almost 90' so that it flows better with the C4D/woman. Nice tag though, very classy :wub:
damn. thats really good man, keep it up. i wish there were tuts that explained that sweet style, but i guess ill keep dreaming
it seems a little big. theres a lot of blank space. maybe shorten it a bit. the colors are nice and I like the effects. nice work