mmm not bad man...couple missed spots and the i dont really like the white outline...but hey its the first and its not bad at all...keep up the work
yer you did leave some spots out but its a blimen good job for your 1st render its not choppy or rough at all
Not bad,t he glow makes it harder to use and you've completely mised gaps in his hair and one by his arm, hate to say it but did you use the magic wand tool then add a glow, because the edges look choppy which is sort of covered by the glow.