9/10 only things i dont like are its: .:size (too big):. .:Smaller render not blended in as well:. Good job, very 'artistic'
same rate..reason is. your render doesnt flow well with the rest of your bg, it's quite blurry and text is random. also the way your render is blended is weird and unattractive. work harder on making your render clear and more direction in your tags.