I like the border, but I can't tell what the render on the side is supposed to be. It looks like Master Chief, but it's a little distorted.
1. Make the border less bevel and emboss. Put it at like 1 percent. 2. Put the grid in front of the border and set the opacity to something like 10. 3. Make it so we can tell what the render is. 4. Get bettect text effects.
1. give the border an emboss(size:0) and then give it an inner-shadow(opacity:40/50%). 2. lower the opacity of the grid in the bg to 20/30%. 3. give your text an emboss(size:0) , then an inner-shadow(opacity:30/40%) and put your AA on "smooth". 4. use a better pixel font for your quote(size:8 - AA: none) 5. use another render or make it bigger , this one is too small and looks messed up.