My First What Do U Think

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what do u think and it u wont u can use it i dont care

 

Nice attempt, I will be honest its not great.

Very choppy however, its a problem that I bet you can overcome by your second render.

 

wow good as ur first one!

 

yeah, the choppiness. u should have started with something easier with no glow. but still a good work for your first. btw, u left bg parts all over the place off the render

 

yeah i know i just seen that but thanks and yeah it was a hard one for my first

 

Wow. You're brave to attempt that image for your first render. Good job, though! Just work on the choppiness and stuff.

 

nice render, This is gj to be you're first render! keep it up dude.

 

^_^ pretty good for your first, keep it up

 

Sick rendering up to the cape and glow, first render I would never expect to overcome that. Link to original is broken

 

fixed it sorry about that