What Is Our Universe

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This is the first large production i have made. I need CnC please. and a rating x/10 is nice or x/100

update added a second one which is better?

 

pretty funky.

 

Well, for me, it's the Milkyway... how about you?

Good work, just a little bit too light to be space IMO

 

vrey nice work =D

 

You should get rid of the stars in front of the planets, or else it takes away from the realism. Great work, otherwise, bu the starfield looks a bit plain and random, not something you put too much work into. Except for those flares.

 

Thanks for the CnC, keep em comin.

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which is better now? first or second?

 

#2 is better. They look pretty good, although space scenes have been done better. 7/10

 

I would have to say I like the first one cause the second one seems a little too 2D without the stars in frount

 

I realise space sceens have been done better. I love your sig too. Anyways its my first attempt at a large peice, also meaniing my first space one

 

Definately V2. In V1, there are stars over the planets. If you were that close to them, the stars wouldn't appear that small because they are thousand billion light years away. Planets are about 2 million light years away from what I remember So it looks pretty out of perspective for that one.

Well anyway this isn't a science lesson. Overall I think it's a good piece, in terms of your first large production ^_^ Planets look well made, but I feel the background is lacking a little depth. Overall 7/10, keep at it.

 

its pretty kl.
i like how u put on the stars.

 

cant see the image, it says yuor account has been suspended