Ok, the first and main thing that strikes out at me is the quote, it looks unequal and as I said my eye is drawn to it. The main text is fine. The background is a bit plain and thats why the (choppy) render looks strangly blended, I think if you added more brushes you could blend the render better. Also try a colour balance layer, get a good mixture of others colours in there, not just orange. I'm not insulting you, just trying to help you out. Love your work 50 Keep it up. :wub:
for the new one--->its good but u have the wrong Forum Color...take SS and opne in PS then Take Eyedropper and use that on ur background so the render doesnt look choppy or the color be different color
yeah thats good only thing is the render looks choppy and wen i first saw it i thought his head was like turned all the way around lol